Hookah Essay

[Swift06]

So my proffessor assigned a paper that is due in a few weeks, but I've already written it since she let us write about ANY community that we belonged to. I chose the hookah community, because it's a pretty broad one and it's really easy to write about.

The two attachments are the prompt (so that you guys can know specifically what the paper is about), and the actual essay. Feel free to give advice or suggest things that I might need to elaborate on, or stuff that I might've just missed. Edited February 7, 2008 by Swift06

[ahwahoo2006]

Not to be a huge buzz-kill, but you don't really the question asked by your professor. Also you have a few major spelling and grammar errors.

-check your colon usage
-never end sentences with dangling participles
-populous =/= populace Edited February 7, 2008 by ahwahoo2006

[Swift06]

Not to be a huge buzz-kill, but you don't really the question asked by your professor. Also you have a few major spelling and grammar errors.

-check your colon usage
-never end sentences with dangling participles
-populous =/= populace

ya i'm not too good with the colons, but i haven't had the time to check on how to use them yet. trying to get better with them. thanks for the crits.

[AKammenzind]

Heh, that was my first assignment in english101. That teacher kicked my ass...

"-10 you didn't properly puctuate the works cited entries." <-every time I misplaced a period, or added an extra space =P

Needless to say, I refuse to use MLA for anything that I don't specifically need it for... simply because of going through that.