TBatcho07 Posted July 5, 2008 Share Posted July 5, 2008 (edited) Here are some poems I wrote about my ex ...always fun...I doubt anyone will actually read these..but if you would be kind enough..let me know what you think..I have TONS more...PLEASE share yours as well!!! All Memories Drown With TimeYou are nothing but a memory now But you won't last forever Just like my dreams.. You will die eventually I once awoke with a smile on my face Now I stay in bed, hidden beneath the sheets These sheets resemble all I've lost With each layer, adds more weight to this burden. Yet I hide like a coward But like I said before You are only a memory now And with this coming storm I'll wash you away I want front row seats to the fear in your eyes When you see me next time Broken halo dripping with shame I will be your unsuspected end Like Noah, I am building an ark. But I'd much rather watch you drown Ocean of RegretThese nights seem to last foreverCold and filled with regretTake my hand as I jump shipAbandon this so called homeI’ll carry you while I canSo long as you can swimBaby, the water is coldSo I’ll keep you closeHours have passedDaylight and warmth bid us farewellI can barely breatheIt’s down to me and youThe water will soon separate usI have no intention of fighting itEnjoy the swimI’ll see you when I get home. That One Day Time has become a neglected addictionA long night now awaiting a tired soulThey say sleep is for the weakBut I’ve been awake far too longThe day was mine from the startNo clouds invaded my sky blueThe prison I often visitedWalls had been removedEngaged in general chatterSoft spoken memoriesStill no clouds in sightOnly the approaching serenityOn that day something changedA long awaited sedation set inMy heart wrote in cursiveMy mind spoke in pidginYou were my turning pointThe declivitous to my uphill struggleA bridge connecting our vibrant yet ruined worldsTime has altered this fog infested path I travelMy faith is abandoning me in my darkest hourI’m losing the fight I swore to overcomeTwice I have felt cold handsSo much for double jeopardyThe three words you speak in EnglishSound like the lingo of the deceiversThis tailspin you have me inWill not reach ground level. An Unfinished Serenade As daylight fadesSo do weOur only purpose is this…An unfinished serenadeFill in the blanks I leftWith your lie’sAfter all,That’s all you’re good forAs this song nears its endPart of me die’sAs this song nears its endPart of you die’sFinally, no blank spots leftNow we can reflect on our pastWe overcame many obstaclesBut in the end, you failed the test.Fill in the blanks I leftWith your lie’sAfter all,That’s how you were raisedFill in the blanks I leftWith your lie’sAs this song nears its endPart of me die’sAs this song nears its endPart of you die’sFill in the blanks I leftWith your lie’sFill in the blanks I leftFinally, no blank spots leftNow I may rest in peaceFor the serenade is no moreAnd neither are you.all associated poetry or other intellectual properties are the sole ownership of Ross Kucera, copyright 2008. Edited July 7, 2008 by TBatcho07 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBatcho07 Posted July 5, 2008 Author Share Posted July 5, 2008 Oh cmon >_<...someone else on this forum has to write poetry lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnny_D Posted July 5, 2008 Share Posted July 5, 2008 There once was a man from nantucket......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBatcho07 Posted July 5, 2008 Author Share Posted July 5, 2008 BOOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giant Ninja Robot Posted July 5, 2008 Share Posted July 5, 2008 I haven't written in a while but if i find some old stuff i'll post it later tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apoc Genesis Posted July 5, 2008 Share Posted July 5, 2008 Suburbian NightsWe once lived on an open plainWith seas of grass swishinvg byWe filled our homes with simple thingsIn plain small home in clear blyue skiesBut then we dreamed of red brick housesLaid neat and tight on that patch of landsWhere picket fences grew with the grassAnd shrubs cut gently by out handsWe dreamed of cars, so bright and strongThat boasted pure industrial mightThat stood for proud AmericaForever using might for rightNow fifty years of dreaming doneAnd tales of woe begin to showThat from these clean grown suburb dreamsOur greatest fears begin to grow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Boss Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Nights into DreamsLet's spark that **** ******while having conversations with the oceanin dark rooms where infinity existsYou sit on your bean-bagamidst black lightsQueen of the surfer girlsSpeak to me in your native tongueand navigate wisps of Nag ChampaThat’s how you rollLet us create this nightgraffiti artwith reckless abandonand perhaps we can giggle if we likeI love your pretty eyesyour pretty knivesI am my father's sonand you are your mother's daughterThe low hum of vintage turntableslulls us to sleep at the end of the nightWhen I wake up you’ll be gone.Sin una AlmaI imagine burning bonfires and sparkling embers,and my dreams ascending to someplace better with the smoke.I imagine that you are here as well so we mayconspire in our dastardly deeds.Thick as thievesGreen lights in the distancetelling us that we are in fact insaneMaybe we'll see red on the horizon one more timeThey called her "El Destructor"but i knew her as "sin una alma"because I don't believe in love anymore.No one to smoke with,No one to die with.and my most recent,90 WordsLooking at your double sided photographcause we all feel happy and sadFeeling blindly and yearningfor understandingbecause blue and orange neverseemed so truthfulI cannot escape this sad facethat is painted onto mineas tears fall downLooking up and seeing the archaic raysof sunshine illuminate imagined lives that never wereand hearing your voiceHearing my reasonexplain to my brainwhy I don't have a heartI've got no more lives left to liveI've got no more lies left to liveall associated poetry or other intellectual properties are the sole ownership of Ross Kucera, copyright 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speak_In_Vowels Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 ill try to find some of my old stuff cause im a lil rusty lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derogatory Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 untitledMilk in my bones...MilkboneWedding VowsI love youYou're prettyI want to touch your tittyPlease be my wifeyand share my lifey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalutika Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Haikus are easybut sometimes they don't make senserefrigerator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalutika Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 To be completely honest... your poems are very similar to the angst filled writings of a teenager. I've written the same thing, with the same words, with the same message and with all the same adjectives and verbs. Sorry.Hell even Shakespeare wrote them.No longer mourn for me when I am deadThen you shall hear the surly sullen bell,Give warning to the world that I am fledFrom this vile world with vilest worms to dwell;Nay, if you read this line, remember notThe hand that writ it; for I love you so,That I in your sweet thoughts would be forgot,If thinking on me then should make you woe.O, if (I say) you look upon this verse,When I perhaps compounded am with clay,Do not so much as my poor name rehearse;But let your love even with my live decay: Lest the wise world should look into your moan , And mock you with me after I am gone.We all do it. We get over it then look back and feel happy we were able to get our feelings out on paper.I will try to dig out some of my more recent stuff if I can find it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apoc Genesis Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 i think that haikusdo not go well in englishlost in translation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBatcho07 Posted July 7, 2008 Author Share Posted July 7, 2008 QUOTE (Kalutika @ Jul 7 2008, 10:02 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>To be completely honest... your poems are very similar to the angst filled writings of a teenager. I've written the same thing, with the same words, with the same message and with all the same adjectives and verbs.I enjoy writing about the things I do to be honest.It doesn't matter to me if people see them as being childish or angsty.I write about what I go through,and it all just happens to be about shitty relationships lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Boss Posted July 8, 2008 Share Posted July 8, 2008 You look lonely by the lake, pt 1Where do we go from here?I'll never forget the night we met...that misty nightand getting drunk on the "13th" flooron Crown Royal and Old Styleand you showing me your tattoosI couldn't figure out why you always sat by meDon't forget the poking,I didn't like thatYou were so drunkand everything was so rightWe didn't really know each other and thats what made it so specialBy the lake will always be my favorite placebut you and i will never be there againBut maybe... In my dreams...all associated poetry or other intellectual properties are the sole ownership of Ross Kucera, copyright 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giant Ninja Robot Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 thread revivalUntitledHe sat in a forest of dreams and revelationIt was a time of meditation, cool earth between warm salty fingers, tilling the soil for the seed of his mindThe time was ripe for the harvest, years of introspection come to fruitionIt barged in as hot air from the bellows, a raw-throated blaspheme was thrust into the peaceThe birds singing songs now sound silent whispers of doubt, a hush soundDo not dream just slumber ever wakefulLay among the thorns, let them into side and pawA hole is a house for a mole or a mouse and a gaping chasm deep throats and devoursPeace within a breath long as none shall followBuried in a sea of green, muted rusty trumpetThe earth runs hot and redBuried Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giant Ninja Robot Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 untitledCould the ink in my veins explain the toiling waters in me turned weak-spirited futility were it splattered in effigy of my carotid explosion?For want and desire singing "Hear me you Earth, why have you given me such tough and bitter skin?"It comes in gurgles and spit, a madman's poem, telling of depths and putrid airWho will listen to the flower selling puppet, dangling beside freeway exit ramps?"His jaw is unhinged!" they all scream as one and a panicked stampede of warm flesh and bodily fluids surge"He's the Good!" say a few"The Bad!" say most"The Ugly." says the piss soaked jawbone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giant Ninja Robot Posted December 4, 2008 Share Posted December 4, 2008 untitledYou can take the man out of the night but the night is in my thoughtsI miss her dark embrace cooling my skin, embers for my soulOne more moondance and I know she seesA man in a million, a man for herOne more rough hewn bone sculpture, another for her flitting gazeWinking down from between the clouds, does my reflection hold so much?I am captive to the oldest curseHow the blind wish to see calling "Master, Savior, Heal us!" and the crickets laughThey knowTheir creeks and chirps tell all, a collective smirking conciousness, an omen of the darkWeakness never overcome, strength never thereIt was made of black silk ties covering my eyes now slipping away and I weep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilarseny Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 As someone studying creative writing, someone who loves poetry, it's great to me to see people turn to writing. Something to think about with this poems: I think it was Wallace Stevens--though I could be wrong on the attribution--who said, "The tangible world is the common denominator of all our intangible worlds". So when you write a poem with a lot of intangible ideas and expressions, it doesn't mean a lot to another reader because those words mean different things to them. In other words, to express complex emotions and ideas it's necessary to find a common denominator, it's necessary to use tangible images and ground yourself in the concrete and specific. I could talk about this for hours, but I'll keep it short. To anyone else invested in poetry: who are your favorite authors? Out of classic authors for me, it's gotta be Hart Crane, John Berryman or John Ashbery. Contemporary is a whole 'nother long list. A couple quick poems of my own: For B.Q.Q., For S.E., For A.S., For M.B. Question of the ages: what have you been reading lately? Cities suspended in mahogany, Cities we walked in under a flaming moon, under dripping streetlights—can the beautiful Be submerged—can an awning protect us from the meteor? I open the book and begin incantations, Remembering our sailing song, our flailing inconsistencies, and we ascend. I will never know If your memory matches mine. This is wrong: you unbuckle the chariot and we burn endlessly Under Promethean garments. Smoke between your toes: ambrosia for the experienced. My weak knees Will always lock. You will always lie in a bed of aching unfulfilment. First Time The opera ends. I stay seated. The peacock: a dog with feathers glued to his tail. The lions, Polish women who leave the theater singing, Its cold outside but did you hear they found God. When the sun comes down from the wires a small man steps out of a hatch. He sang a beautiful disembodied tenor, believing the world will end soon. The guards don't notice me and drink behind a zookeeper's cage that seems whole only when seen straight on. The owner sweeps the floor. If I leave, I'll be back tomorrow in another section. Behind the back curtain two lovers break up and it really is the first time that's happened. Sylvia Your eyes, & did you know your own tragedy? Fruit was around in 1959... cool, non? Every New England moth would rather be an Italian one. Open the box, "but only once per decade," shred the contents or a widower will do it for you. You are lucky we've indexed every year of your life alphabetically, from air-eating to turning-burning. And you, the world at your bed, shrinking the whites of your eyes, worshiping the sun god at rest between your breasts. Letter to Self, In Parts I. One self to one's self: mercy/mercy. First: honesty. Then, acknowledgment of insincerity as distance over time. Please sign here. One may record one's identity as indefinite given one is specific as to one's recipient. One must then cope with the crisis of not knowing one's own return address. I have not known mine for years and as a result all of this correspondence has been lost. II. Above the bar and its 100 identical scotches there is printed: "The Past Perfect Is Anything But". The stereo is primal. The patrons are primal and hairy and some have spears. If I offer to buy them drinks they tell me Sunday is a day for writing letters. If I sit down to write one they throw me out the back. As I write this I am bleeding and may not make it home to receive my own letter. III. If I say I am sincere you will describe a painting as a veil: raising up, turning before the mirror, one will say anything to avoid hearing one's own voice. Is distance self-imposed? The post office loses me, another tactic, bending to recognition, smiling under a magnifying glass. If you hear me, burn this letter upon receiving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giant Ninja Robot Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 Will I like your stuff. Never studied poetry by any means and I'll be the first to admit I stray towards the absract quite a bit. Good advice. Sometimes I just feel the need to let it rip. More often than not the complex idea I have make perfect sence to me and the further I stray from the basic concept that initially comes to me the further away I feel I get from the deep meaning behind the wordsHard to find the balance for me sometimes, since I write for me and not to communicate with others or for the printed page when I'm really in the middle of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roux58 Posted December 5, 2008 Share Posted December 5, 2008 Drain your batteriesRecharge (if you wish)walk fool walkCannons firingatwillRed flowers over (the heart)give your silenceFor its all youcandoGot lots.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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