Coleman Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 So as some of you may know I love poetry I have been so dead from work lately that I haven't written any in months though. Now havin quit my job and am headed on a path to a new chapter in my life my mind is racing I've been on a train since 11 last night and have slept maybe an hour but I finally wrote a new poem the words just flowed out of me with such ease and grace I was so pleased that I wanted to share it with y'all. One day I hope to get some of these published but for now I wrote out of pure love and enjoyment of poetry. And now the moment you all have been waiting on my first poem in months. Please please please give me your two cents as I share these The sun slowly arises on this dreary day And awakens us to new beginnings As I stare out upon the horizon I see nothing But I know in my heart In my soul That the future holds great things The darkness is what keeps us moving Constantly headed towards the light at the end of the tunnel Onward folks life awaits us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chreees Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 Deep, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coleman Posted April 26, 2013 Author Share Posted April 26, 2013 So my writing seems to come in spurts now sadly it used to be a constant thing but I finally wrote a new one today. To better explain this one though you need to understand one of my metaphors, the dark and light. Now this metaphor is different for me darkness is life and light is death much like the dark tunnel and the light at the end is whatever happens after death so without further adieu here it is Sucked in by the whirlpool of endless despair And spat back upon the land I once knew There is nothing here for me Just sad memories And haunting shadows of those I once knew Nothing will ever be the same Nor do I want it to I have stared in to the abyss Only to find it looking back at me Laughing As it condemned me to walk this barren land Smirking as it told me its not your time And then the darkness enveloped me And I knew things were just as they were before But not I I was forever changed I no longer feared death But I loathed the darkness that I had once loved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joytron Posted April 26, 2013 Share Posted April 26, 2013 Here is one I wrote: I sit cross-legged In the rough Earth Pulling, I feel the tendrils resist As if to say Let me live! But like all things the voice Dies Only to be replaced by something Not more beautiful in any way Or better But something that belongs A thought I can not help Takes root like those tendrils It is the hand of God, Removing the invasive white man To be replaced with the Natives Not more beautiful in any way Or better But something that belongs The tendrils once again break I sit cross-legged In the rough earth I wonder what caused this thought Has the dust made its way into my brain Or perhaps too much Snyder Or maybe something simpler Less tangible Perhaps there is something about Sitting cross-legged In the rough Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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